October critique
1. -I like all the spirt week pictures
-I like the article "What to expect when you're expecting at Steinmetz" but it was based on
one person
-I like my photo opinion
-I didn't like that the "Archery is coming soon" didn't include a picture to show what activity
it was.
2. Photo Opinion was not as easy as i figure it would be but over all it was easy. I had trouble finding a freshman, a sophomore, and a junior
October Star
The adviser's news judgment result in "Homecoming lifts spirits" being the first page because it was what everybody was waiting to hear who had won homecoming king and queen. Also the it was what everyone was talking about.
"Freshy Friday didn't break the piggy bank" was place below because even thought it was not as big news as who won homecoming it was still something everybody else looks foward to execpt the freshman.Even though every other story was good it was not really eye catching as Homecomin and Freshy Friday.
The Guitar club might of been more interesting then Ms. Ryan's story.
Dwayne Wade
"The biggest thing is to let your voice be heard, let your story be herd. A lot of things have been siad about me... but at the end of the day my concern is for my kids," was a quote that was not included int the Tribune.
Dwyane Wade was acused of many allegations of being an abusive toward his ex-wife and his sons. Making him seem like an aggressive person; the bad guy.
"Punishment", "We support you" were quotes that were in the Tribune but not in the Sun-Times. The Sun-Times didnt not meantion that how Siohvaughn Wade has change from when she first meet in high school.
The angle of the story was to make it seem like his ex-wife was the one that started everything and he was just trying to make the best of it.
The Tribune might have not put this stroy in the first page because they might not have thought it was very important to readers.
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